Batman Fanfiction Oc

Please help! Would you consider my character a Mary-Sue? Or do you ever worry that your OC is considered one?
I recently started writing a fan fiction on The Dark Knight/Batman Begins set years after The Dark Knight, where it is in the perspective of Bruce Wayne’s wife. I know, it is probably hard to imagine him married, but in it she expresses her worry for his absence every evening he goes out to review the city, and also something has happened where she would like to seek vengeance on the person responsible.
I always worry that my character is very ‘Mary-Sue’, as in she is very predictable and not at all realistic. I have been trying to keep her as realistic as possible, but I have my doubts. Could somebody please tell me if she would be a Mary-sue to you? (Below, is my story). When writing a fan fiction, do you ever worry that your OC would be considered a Mary-Sue?
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5716596/1/The_Dark_Knights_Wife
Thank you so much, I would really appreciate it.
I think all fanfic writers worry whether their OC is a Mary-Sue or not–or at least they all should. Even fiction writers need to take a step back once in a while and make sure they aren’t going down Sue Lane. The following link has a nice test that indicates how Sue-like a character has gotten:
http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm
Hope that helps!
When The Truth Is Too Dangerous- Batman Trailer One
Tags: au, batman, batman fanfiction oc, dcu, fic, gen
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